diff -ru MWDF-600-orig/MasterworkDwarfFortress/repository/getting_started_succubus.html MWDF-600/MasterworkDwarfFortress/repository/getting_started_succubus.html --- MWDF-600-orig/MasterworkDwarfFortress/repository/getting_started_succubus.html 2014-07-16 18:22:42.000000000 -0400 +++ MWDF-600/MasterworkDwarfFortress/repository/getting_started_succubus.html 2014-08-07 21:29:05.703483521 -0400 @@ -33,37 +33,37 @@
This -mod is pre-installed. Just download, unpack, thats it. When you are -reading this, you already installed the mod, congratulation. Please do +mod is pre-installed. Just download, unpack, that's it. When you are +reading this, you already installed the mod, congratulations. Please do not copy it over vanilla DF or older mod versions. Just unpack it into a new folder.
To alter the mod, you can run the Masterwork Dwarf Fortress.exe. You will need to do this to set Succubus -as a playable race. Just open it up, click on 'Races' and you will see +as a playable race. Just open it up, click on 'Civilizations' and you will see a large list of civilizations. Currently Dwarves, Orcs, Kobolds, -Gnomes, Warlocks and Succubi are potentially playable. Tick the box +Gnomes, Warlocks, Succubi and Humans are potentially playable. Tick the box under 'Fort Mode' and all is done.
If you just want to play one race, it is recommended to turn the other races non-playable. -It will make embarking easier, since you dont have to chose your race +It will make embarking easier, since you don't have to choose your race ingame.
The succubi use a mix of surface and underground features. They enjoy -expansive palace where dark stone and gem windows meet decorated +expansive palaces where dark stone and gem windows meet decorated furniture. Each fort in their kingdom must be treated as a work of art.
But the finely decorated bedrooms hide a darker secret. In the underground, dark temples maintain a link between the surface and the horrors below, enabling the succubi to summon powerful monsters while the witches -sacrify the souls of their enemies for their own leisure, or their -enemies pain.
+sacrifice the souls of their enemies for their own leisure, or their +enemies' pain.If possible, succubi prefer to embark on evil biomes. They particulary enjoy drinking wine made from evil plants and -their cattle does not suffer there. Beward of +their cattle does not suffer there. Beware of the undead who will never understand desires the way lust demons do.
You
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First
appoit your lady of pain and create a squad for her. Get her to
train quickly and give her 2 sparring mates after the first migration
-wave. Be careful of her happines however, digging a room for her and
+wave. Be careful of her happiness however, digging a room for her and
making early furniture with your carpenter is a good idea. Otherwise the standard
procedure to securing your supplies
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You can also make a
worker fire immune and start
digging space for a magma reservoir with a magma well designed to pour
-into it. Use your fire immune succubi to summon magma. Buliding your
+into it. Use your fire immune succubi to summon magma. Building your
furnaces on top of those will unlock most of the industry. As an
alternative to immigrants, making a large quantity of cage traps will
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Items
First things on the map